Ok, at this point, turn UP, again, turn funny. The dark parts are so powerful that they need softening, so if you can keep up a ratio of 10 funny/quirky pages (that youre so good at) versus one dark maggoty-eyes page (which youre equally good at but must use sparingly to let its effect ride the reader a while)...is my advice too frank, too much? Apologizing in advance if it is. Every reader creates his/ her own meaning so other readers might disagree.
This, by the way, at the risk of repeating myself, is truly brilliant work.
thank you- i agree with you. i'm afraid i am locking the blog now as my students have begun stumbling on it- email me your email address on facebook so i will invite you to join the blog soon
I thought this one was a fish though. Is it a chicken with its heart cut out?
ReplyDeletehaha
ReplyDeleteits a fish
i'm trying to create dissonance
and i suppose i'm kinda succeeding :)
Ok, at this point, turn UP, again, turn funny. The dark parts are so powerful that they need softening, so if you can keep up a ratio of 10 funny/quirky pages (that youre so good at) versus one dark maggoty-eyes page (which youre equally good at but must use sparingly to let its effect ride the reader a while)...is my advice too frank, too much? Apologizing in advance if it is. Every reader creates his/ her own meaning so other readers might disagree.
ReplyDeleteThis, by the way, at the risk of repeating myself, is truly brilliant work.
thank you- i agree with you.
ReplyDeletei'm afraid i am locking the blog now as my students have begun stumbling on it- email me your email address on facebook so i will invite you to join the blog soon
Add me fauz.
ReplyDeletehave you seen majid majidi's films?
ReplyDeleteno, I haven't, sounds Iranian- I'll definitely check them out.
ReplyDelete